She craves the sound of Her Masters voice.
She craves!
She craves the touch of her Masters hand.
She craves!
She craves the feeling of her Masters strap,
His canes, His paddles.
She craves!
She craves the punishment her Master gives her
when she has done wrong.
She craves!
She craves the taste of her Master.
She craves!
She craves the feel of her Masters warm body as
He holds her after her beatings to
calm her body.
She craves!
She craves her Masters kisses.
She craves!
She craves to worship her Master.
She craves!
She craves to sit at His feet.
She craves!
She craves to pleasure her Master in anyway
He wishes for after all she is His slave.
She craves!
She craves to wear His collar.
She craves!
Author notes
This is one of my favorites because I wrote it right after I met Master and I wrote it for Him.
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- personal favorite by Virgoan.
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Comments
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Another writer to thank!
I never question how I feel towards my Master, but I have often wondered if I am ad oddity. Since reading poems like this, it pleases me greatly to know that others have expressed EXACTLY what I feel. Beautifully done, thank you!
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I can see this cleary. Nice and contemporarily expressed.
On a personal note, I suggest the lessening of the word 'she craves'. I just think too much tends to overshadow the thoughts you have.
My opinion, your call.
Keep sharing your gift.
HENSLEY
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Thank you for your comments, but i think i will leave the lines in the poem as Master loved the poem the way that it was written. but thank you anyway.
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YOU ARE HIS SLAVE, INDEED!
You sound like a fine and loyal slave, indeed - who knows that HER MASTER is the key to her peace and harmony - that she craves with all her heart and soul! A sweet and sensual piece that had me wishing that I could be your MASTER - of only for a day - if me MISTRESS would allow it!
Love & Peace!
Earl.
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Thank you for the sweet comments. This piece was written to Him not long after W/we met.It has taken me a long time to find the right One and the journey with Him has been and awesome one indeed. Thank you again my friend.
Hugs Ya!
Cheryl
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Beautifully written..the honesty and emotion flows and the sexual needs come to the surface very well.
I think that you did an excellent job of portraying your needs and desires.
I am impressed...
Simon
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Thank you so much for your kind words Simon. i am hoping to use this as part of my collaring when that day comes.
crafty
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a butiful write for Your Master
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The urgency in this is palpable and the repetition of 'She craves!' definitely added to it!
Having a Master/Dom who can fulfill a slave's/sub's desire for the sense of belonging is truly special and personally I think this should be read by candlelight and in front of an awe-inspired audience - well done - this was amazing!!!!
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Thank You
Thank you so much for your comment. You don't know how much it means to me. (well maybe you do lol) I wrote this piece just for my Master not long after I submitted to Him, so it means a lot to U/us both. I am also thinking of having it read at my collaring to Master as a gift from me. Thanks again. *smiles*
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you CANNOT go wrong with something like this at a formal collaring
good luck and congrats that you have found somebody who means so much to you
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