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Blissful Ignorance

No crushing blow shall pierce a wall of ignorance.
For that, ignorance is bliss.
To be God in your own world, surrounded by shadows
Proves not to be great leadership.

Observe beliefs and replace ignorance with knowledge.
For knowledge is life, the way we live.
Naive and ignorant; Uninformed and dead.
We journey through this, a book of lies.

The moon smiles when the sun fails.
When all knowledge is collected,
all ignorance is gone and
you ascend to the gates of glory.

Author notes

Petycash, and this entry is for "real knowledge is to know the extent of ones ignorance" [Confucius]

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  • Antebellum
    March 26
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    No crushing blow shall pierce a wall of ignorance.
    LOVED this line.


  • Nobody Important
    February 8

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    The first line is in the best i my opinion.I agree with the message, good poem.Flows well but it losesit toward the end.


  • Candy Morphine
    July 4, 2008
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    wow the way this was writen was thought-prevoking and inspiring.
    this is a beautiful poem


  • LovesLostLiterature
    April 27, 2008
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    I really like this write the words mesh togther and makes it sound beautiful.


  • Shancy Fayre
    April 25, 2008
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    Again, beautiful! Ignorance kills and you've spelled it all out for us. Bravo! Shancy.


  • righteousme
    April 10, 2008
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    GREAT write... good luck in the contest...


  • brittany.geeze
    April 8, 2008
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    very nice take on the prompt/quote.

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