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Confined

Trapped in the chains now
trying to find the key...
Can they even see how
this hold is killing me?

Caught up in the darkness now
the sun calls out to me...
I will ever disavow
though plain for all to see.

This struggle is all vain now
life confined is what I see...
The meek, frail heart takes one last bow
will I ever just get free?

Author notes

First not-prewritten contest entry. I just picked it out, and it kinda took a life of its own. Please comment if read.

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  • Piper77
    April 22, 2008
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    Oi, me likey, me likey a lot. This is really good! 5 STARS!