Slowly driving her insane

She sits in quiet contemplation
head in hands, crying frozen tears
bearing heartaches misery
listening to melodic rain
slowly driving her insane.

Inner thoughts are screaming

debating each ill fated word

shamless conversations

eating away her shallow brain

slowly driving her insane.

Cast away hopes of salvation

her madness builds witthin

empy bottle laying at her feet

only hate and loathing remain

slowly driving her insane.

Author notes

for you my sis...didn't want to write sad for you but it is your prompt.

Luv ya

Simon

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SmokinHotWhiteTiger
April 10, 2008
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Nice Work
Quite an extra ordinary but well penned poem & no suprise you won Bronze here as you really penned quite a nice smooth flowing poem. your wording were of superior choice & your flow was quite extra ordinary. any ways wonderfully done all round & keep up the might good work here.
kiwigirljacks
April 8, 2008

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That was sad but oh so beautiful too... brought tears to my eyes...
This is outstanding bro!
Angelflower
April 8, 2008

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Oh my beautiful brother!!! this was so beautiful!! You have such a beautiful poetic.. This made me cry but I needed that... Thank you so much!! I really love it... Thank you thank you so much...
Beautifully done..

Jetleena