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Winters snore.

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Down the steps of

cobbled stones

an' beneath the trees

of snowflakes blown,

winter called to

say hello

and brought with it

the purity of

snow.

Through the gates

and to my door

I felt the chill

of winters

Snore

but as I looked out

I could not ignore

this seasons bite

and piercing

roar.

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  • Sagerider
    April 9
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    this is great.

    Very visual, I love it.


  • Celtic Legend
    April 8

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    really awesome! this doesn't reflect winter in az but it does in other places! great job! loved it all

  • FransB silver member
    April 8

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    I enjoyed this 'winter flow' and while you write of 'cold' and 'silence' there is also the 'roar' that only such coldness can give. Frans


  • Cannonsfire silver member
    April 8

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    You make me cold just reading it!!! Oh and thanks for my gift I loves ya back! Love, C


  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    April 7

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    Wonderful!! I love snow, and unfortunately do not get much here. This is so well written. Great take on the prompt. Thank you for entering and good luck!
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