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On Grandma's knee.

Missing image

Grandma hugs me

I hug my doll

Grandma said

it will hurt when I fall.

Grandma's arms are

very strong

Grandma's right and

seldom wrong.

Grandma's love

will never sway

On Grandma's Knee

I want to stay.

 

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  • Angels Whispers gold member
    April 12

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    BEAUTIFUL

    This write is beautiful my poet friend.Being a grandmother myself, i can relate to your written words.They are so beautiful and so much love flows from your quill as you write the words upon your page, and so much wisdom you have weaved within your words.I wish you all the best in the contest.
    Mant blessings to you and take care.
    ~Angel~


  • Sagerider gold member
    April 9
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    I really like this one.

    You are a talent.


  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    April 7

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    How delightful and sweet! What a beautiful poem for a grandma to read to her grandchild. Awesome write to go with a beautiful painting. Very well done. Thanks for entering and good luck!

  • Sgt B silver member
    April 7
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    awwwwww

    So very sweet and sincere. I could feel your love in this write, good lob.
    ~Ron~