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What's this Feeling

What's this feeling,
growing deep in my chest?
The feeling,
that will not let my heart rest.

What's this feeling,
that I get when we touch?
The feeling,
that I feel when we cuddle on the couch.

What's this feeling,
that makes me feel like I'm as free as a dove?
The Feeling,
Is it Love?

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  • UnravledLove
    June 14, 2008
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    This is a great poem. I really like the second and fourth lines.


  • donttellmeyoucare
    April 26, 2008
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    WOW! I really like it. I don't know what to say I love the second stanza.