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Reaction To Falling In Love With You.

Slower than the sun's decision
into a watery orange colored East.
Softer than a Connecticut Autumn rain.
Beyond the certainly that the earth is round.
Gentle is the evening breeze,
still warm enough to sleep and dream.
There is no doubt in my mind I'm falling.
I didn't expect or think to,
but it's true.
I'm falling in love with you.
Gliding through Central Park,
leaves cascading over me,
I'm somewhere other than reality.
Crisp & clear is the air.
I know, I can sense the elegance
of how my punch drunk love
is defined on my face.
Smile! Infectious smile!
There's no doubt in my mind what's going on.
I am falling in love.
Falling in love with you.

Audrey Evans
2/7/2006

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  • luvdrkchocolate
    October 27, 2008
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    Oh. This is a great little poem that you have going on here. It such a wonderful feeling to have. I just love how love feels when you first fall for someone. I could totally get what you were saying about how it feels. I thought you did a good job of expressing yourself here.


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    September 21, 2008

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    yes..I agree with you..and your poetry is the wonderful and strong proof of this poetry....well done...

  • piccola silver member
    August 4, 2008
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    "I know, I can sense the elegance
    of how my punch drunk love
    is defined on my face.
    Smile! Infectious smile!
    There's no doubt in my mind what's going on.
    I am falling in love.
    Falling in love with you." my favorite lines. This is so soft and romantic. I like it a lot. Thank you for your entry


  • lightswitches
    July 31, 2008
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    "gliding through central park"
    I really liked that line!
    thanks for entering too!


    • AudreyEvans
      August 2, 2008
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      Thank you for your comment, looking forward to another one of your contests.

      Audrey Palmer
      aka rubyvaroom


  • Super-GOREgous
    April 11, 2008

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    que cute!

    awww.....and you shud fall...but dont fall too hard cause if that happens then you can expect to be really dissapointed... good job! -Gore

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