On an exotic island of illicit pleasures,
provocative cultures rendezvous
in a fusion of decadence and intrigue.
The midnight ponders amidst an ebony sky,
as chocolate coated bodies melt over
vanilla dipped cream.
The enchantment of curiosity flavors
the passion of delectable yearnings,
as mocha glazed lips entwine
in the nectar of succulent butter
pecan palates.
Primitive moanings and groanings effervesce
a sexually charged atmosphere,
as waves of exuberance splash into
an erupting shore of interracial delight.
The language of love blends in unity
as hershey colored treats are devoured
in the intermingling of variety.
Provoking fiery tongues of lust to
utter in dialogues of wantonness.
A banana split of scrumptious indulgences
spread across the crystal sands,
adorned with all the trimmings of erotic bliss.
As seductive bodies of enticement engage
in a melange of sensual pleasures,
seeking self gratification in the
infamous melting pot of love.
A contest entry
- Vanilla and Chocolate - a Sensual Confection by dance11.
1000 points, ended April 20, 2008, 9 entries
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Comments
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Beautifully written...I loved it all. Hard to say what my most favorite part is, it is all so scrumptious. "As seductive bodies of enticement engage in a melange of sensual pleasures,
seeking self gratification in the infamous melting pot of love."
Good luck
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tis true, tis true...we all jus want to get pleasured and i like this part:
As seductive bodies of enticement engage
in a melange of sensual pleasures,
seeking self gratification in the
infamous melting pot of love
its really self explainatory.... Goood JooB! -Gore
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You melted me with your imagery. I especially enjoyed the superb use of vocabulary. Sensual and sumptuous all in one. Great job! Thank you for your entry!
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ooohh this sizzles with delight and rapture, almost dangerously hot with seduction! I loved the imagery and colour of this poem,
'the midnight ponders amidst an ebony sky
as chocolate coated bodies melt
over vanilla dripped cream'
it sounds so exotic one can almost smell the mocha.
'as mocha glazed lips entwine
in the nectar of succulent butter
pecan palates'
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