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The First Time

Like sex, I will always remember my first kill,

images flash to mind, the hunt, the blade, the thrill.

The addiction started, always I hunger for more,

lust for the surrender, as lifeless bodies fall to the floor.

 

That first time, unskilled, without talent or finesse.

Mistakes many, now perfected to a murderous tempest.

Techniques of torture, honed to perfection for pleasure,

slow and relentless, releasing them from the hell at leisure.

 

Blood-crazed and psychotic, a death loving demon,

capturing you, entrapped in your need to release semen.

After its spilt, unwanted seed, I can come alive,

my turn has come, on your demise I will thrive.

 

Your screams feed me, sating my sadistic need,

but only the finality of your death will fill my greed.

One day my reign of terror will end, it's a sure bet,

To be continued, don't sleep, they have not caught me yet.

 

Author notes

OK I believe you have read my best dark write that is ready for release, to date which is Hell Hath No Fury so have pulled one out from my notes from years ago.

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  • Synthetic-Nightmare
    July 20, 2008

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    WOW....

    this is actually extremely hot and well written! I love the details you added into this masterpiece, wonderful my friend!
    kudos


  • Ktulu Blackwolfe silver member
    April 7, 2008

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    This is an unbelievable write...I really enjoyed reading this, it reminds me of my own serial killer series I was working on..

    Thank you for entering and good luck.

    **Ktulu Blackwolfe**