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My Poem For You

He痴 had this planned
This obstacle course

He痴 had it planned
Since before I was born

He loves me,
Though I fail

He値l always be
Forever there

He knows that I値l fail
That our steps will part

He痴 knows that I値l try
To come back to him

I once felt him strong,
I once knew his love

The love he gave me,
Was unconditional love

No one will ever love,
Love me like he did

No one will ever know,
Know me like he does

All I want to do,
Is just to worship him

I want to live for him,
The way he wants me to live

I want to be the women,
Who he wants me to be

I know that I値l always,
Stray from the path I値l walk with him

No matter how far I stray,
His arms will take me back

He died for me,
And how do I repay?

By sinning and denying,
My living for him

I will always know,
That He knows all

He値l know my future,
My past, my all

He値l always be,
The one I need

The one that I,
Want to please

So here is my prayer,
A prayer for him

To hear my pleas,
To come to my needs

I need you Lord,
I want you back.

I know your need for me to do your deed,
I know your love.

Thank you Lord,
For giving me unconditional love.

Please help me stay,
Stay with you.

I want to live,
Live for you.

I am yours,
Yours to commandeer.

To become who you want,
To show the world your Fatherly love.

All I need,
Is my faith

And thank you Lord
For showing me where it is.

Thank you Lord,
For showing me.

Where to go,
When in need.

Thank you Lord,
For putting out


All those people
Who care and help.

All those people who
Care for me.

They are who,
Show me that

Your love will never leave,
Leave me alone

As you wish my Lord,
That is how I値l live!

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  • Keystone Theater
    April 7, 2008

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    It was quite clearly about God. I can usually tell by the overt tones of reverence in one's poetry. It is good that you feel this way. It's a far less lonely place when one believes.