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Battle Scars

You wonder why I cover up
I just want you to look deeper
something buried inside me
the person I once was

When you see me
do you look into my eyes
or my scars?
God knows there are enough

My pain foolish eye has gone
and i'm here
putting myself out there
for you

How did it feel to touch raised skin?
did it scare you?
I saw the look on your face
you wanted to play it off

Since that night
you haven't looked at me the same
I'm left here questioning myself
questioning your thoughts

I've won the war
but the fight is still in me
boiling at the flesh
with raised battle scars

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  • amy86
    April 7, 2008

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    I think it is excellent, This is so true 'since that night you havnt looked at me the same' trust me, people dont understand or even want to understand. you have done relly well here x