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Atonement

 

 

The dark lords army,forewarned
of their retched sins.

Eradicated by the righteous hand of God,
blow by blow...

 

Striking down the enemy,
mercilessly:

 

 

 

 

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20-30 Words
raiden2d88@photobucket.com

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  • penman gold member
    April 17, 2008

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    Excellent

    Wonderful creation for the contest. Such a powerful use of 20 words. Congrats on your honorable mention.

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    April 13, 2008

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    I really like this dear brother congrats on the Honorable mention much love always I send you


  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    April 9, 2008

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    PimpinDelight

    Great little write Congratulations on winning the honorable mention. Redwing Spirit


  • first forgotten
    April 9, 2008
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    Thats hella crazy good! you're such a great writer! congrats.


  • Desire gold member
    April 9, 2008

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    Oh My!!

    Fantastic take on the picture prompt~~
    Powerful message and images
    You brought forth much to the table...

    Congratulations on Your HM!
    -Throws confetti-
    Woooooooooo Hoooooooooooo


    Keep that quill dancing...Woot Woot!!
    Thank You for sharing Your Talent and Spirit~
    Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
    Best wishes too
    and much love~ Desire~*~


  • delightfulmess silver member
    April 9, 2008

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    What power...
    Amazing take on the prompt. I would have been struck dumb with this one.

    Congrats on you Hm.


    Delila


  • poorme
    April 9, 2008
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    Such [ower in so few words.Well done.Congrats on your trophy...


  • Three Doves
    April 8, 2008

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    fantastic take on the prompt Tony. Well written. Congratulations on the award. Peace in light and love.
    Noah


  • Kelli Marie
    April 8, 2008

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    What a grand twenty-four words that says so much. Very nice. Glad you received a mention. Congratulations!
    Kelli


  • PerfectImperfection
    April 7, 2008

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    I found this to be such a great reaction to the image prompt. Nicey done - very powerful write indeed!

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