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Caterpillar

I am suffering tremendous pain
Everything is wrenching at my brain
I curl up into a little ball,
no one can hurt me at all.
I hide in my corner and want to die.
Sit within my cocoon,
so many tears I cry 
Before I know it, I’m a beautiful butterfly
Released from my previous and pain-filled skin
I thought my horrible world had come to an end 
In this tragic world I must stay
Until the day comes I will fly away

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contest quote, "The caterpillar thought that it had reached the end of its world. Then, it turned into a butterfly "

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  • Three Doves
    April 9, 2008

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    A wonderful read. Continue writing your poetry please. Thank you for sharing your heart.
    Peace in light and love
    Noah


  • poet2angels gold member
    April 8, 2008
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    ty for entering my contest!
    Best wishes

    Lynda