i thank her for that,
shes as kind as an angel,
as caring as a bear,
She probally is the boss of the family,
Like a lioness might be the boss of the pride,
she made me feel welcome,
i thank her for that,
shes as kind as an angel,
as caring as a bear,
She probally is the boss of the family,
Like a lioness might be the boss of the pride,
i thank her for that,
shes as kind as an angel,
as caring as a bear,
She probally is the boss of the family,
Like a lioness might be the boss of the pride,
Author notes
i wrote this i know its short but il write a new longer one later this week after school
A contest entry
- MY AP FAMILY ONLY by peridotPixi.
1020 points, ended April 15, 2008, 6 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - In Honor of reciving 100 HMs by peridotPixi.
681 points, ended July 8, 2008, 23 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - HM winners or Metaphorical poems by Chocoholic156.
550 points, ended September 21, 2008, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
what do u think
Comments
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Thank you for the beautiful entry to my contest,
I like the editing you have done to this poem, I love the little emotion guys you have used and I like how you say that I am probably the boss of the family, you know as well as I do that I think I’m the boss of my AP family, well most of it anyways,
as always keep up the wonderful writing, ~your sis Amy
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'she made me fell welcome' fell? feel dont u mean? -
good luck guys im looking forward to seing everyones entries
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