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stammering breaths

dreams of what was
the beauty of desires
you cry alone at night
yet you eternally linger in this broken mind

go away
please
leave

this soul cannot take another day of torture
you sing only to those who cannot hear
you cry only to those who do not care

the torment which you caused
the pain which you created
sometimes what's not meant hurts the most

pull away my hair
take it apart
you burn away at what was my heart

pinpricks on my heart
teardrops on my soul

my breathe shorts
my heart speeds
shouting out to the world
but nothings to be heard


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  • onapedestalIstand
    May 6, 2008
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    sexyness..thanks for your time and efforts..sarah


  • Annexed Josephine
    April 7, 2008
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    brilliant background thank you for exaggeration. it's nice. it's like a drag queen.


  • XxXEmoRainDropsXxX
    April 7, 2008

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    wow. that was amazing. i loved it, but it was hard to read. the text color and the background color dont mix well together. it kinda hurt my eyes and it was hard to read. but it was a really good poem. i loved it!