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Little Columbus Guards!

Two were the roads
ready before eyes
desires were the loads
to touch more skies!


Frost was lucky,
the selection was quick;
but I too was fluky
just one more to stick.

Yes!

Digital path
the most travelled,
and the water way
the less selected.

Confided to enter
the rarely chosen,
mind at its centre
had not broken.

Hence were the sails
I had in miles
came around the world
like little Columbus

Mini voyages and
more discipline -

turned my life
blue and white
that is simply
Calm and quiet!

I guard the coast
with true passion,
have more to boast
about my Indian ocean! 

Author notes

The roads traveled by my little Columbus(my hubby) before choosing his carrier as Officer in Indian Coast Guard!

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  • Pollycheck
    April 17, 2008

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    Thank you for entering my military contest. You can be very proud of your husband for picking a career in the military. It is a noble career.


  • angels of the night silver member
    April 11, 2008

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    this was a well written poem full imagey. i like the way you journey through like columbus an interestin twist!
    angel