Contemplating the Holy Trinity
of Me, Myself and I,
licking a slick page
with despair;
split tongued, tail in mouth,
never-ending work to chuff skin-
I loosened a single thread
and unraveled, fraying
until I was exposed to light
which drew me to burn
away old appendages
and I wept sweat before I flew
Author notes
ATC - A Flutter
A contest entry
- Searching For A Sigh In A Quickie~ by poet2angels.
475 points, ended April 9, 2008, 10 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Beautifully penned with so much vivid imagery! Amazing!
Congratualtions on your award!
Jazzy
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Poetry in motion. Congratulations on the Award.
Peace in light and love.
Noah
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This is so marvelous...You got the quote so well...You stepped out of the box, and flew~
Love it
Lynda
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There is some powerfull imagery going on here... you haven't lost your touch!!!
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Sounds like life in normal poetic mode to streach...wonderful entry
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