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war of wills



clock ticking
in time to the
drumming of fingertips

wine left untouched,
coffee my choice now

I search for
the timid child,
heart full of love

instead I find angst
and fear in this teen's
rough form

silver tongue wagging,
spitting venomous bile

continuing to strike
with unwritten words
on an imaginary notebook

arrows of hatred
missing their target,
frustration continues
to wash over her in waves

finally,
acknowledgement that
this war of wills
is not hers to win

words need not pass her lips,
only an embrace between
mother and daughter

Author notes

Option Word Bank
wine
silver
clock
coffee
rough
timid
wash
mother
notebook
unwritten

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  • mcheadle
    April 11, 2008

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    a write to show feelings

    Love does dwell in life , has it all been forgoten. Where is the little one I carried , the little one I loved, God fill this emptynes we now share...mac


    • fortyninereasons gold member
      April 11, 2008
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      Thank you mac for your comment. One can only hope, that the love and guidance shines through in the end. Juls


  • Cannonsfire
    April 8, 2008

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    Oh I felt this one, and I know how much it hurts deep inside. Love, C


  • Randomly Beautiful
    April 7, 2008
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    Sometimes words are not needed. Even for a poet.