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earthly ties

earthbound sphere of all creation
lives in the mind of all secretive
maidens who lie and seek to secure
a new picture of the future in their
arms

secure thoughts of a sun ripened
delivery and chaste dreams

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  • imahealer
    April 7, 2008
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    So few lines. Such a huge message! Your poem makes me feel so serene. The flow was beautiful. The metaphors "secretive maidens", so wonderful. I can't say enough about this wonderful entry!
    Thank you for entering my contest and best wishes.

    Shana