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Submissive

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My bottom lip watching you as you walk past me

Mmmmmmmmmmm

Damn you’re build so right

A structure of pure perfection

As my fingers glide across every rip and cut

From your chest to your stomach

Those abs Are just so tight

Looking you into your eyes

So intense

I want you in every fucking position

That’s known to men

As I continue to move my finger across

This masterpiece which you call your body

Around your waist

Up and down your back

Putting myself in closer to you

Inhaling your scent

My panties now wet

As I take my tongue and trace over your lips

The sweetest flavor I ever, ever taste

Taken me to a new high

My desire for you

Now an obsession

A craving of satisfaction

With you inside of me

My fingers now on your shoulder

Slowly sliding off your sweater

Shit you’re so fucking fine

You have no idea what is it you do to me

You are my truest, truest fantasy

Taking me into your arms

Damn this is what heaven must feels like

Exhale I think I’m in love

Your fingers making its way up my thighs

My heart now skips a beat

With every touch of your hand

My eyes now close as your fingers

Enter my world of wetness

Which are my cries

For you to please me

Deep

Deep

I feel your fingers go

My body becoming weak

As I cry silence tears

My breath you seem to have stolen

Replaces with yours as we kiss

I have fallen

Submissively

I’m yours

By: Levesta

Author notes

(((BORDER OFF LIMITS)))

the pictures I got from Tango thanks love for lettting me use you the write and border comes for me hope u enjoy

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  • Rheea gold member
    July 4, 2008
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    goly dang gee whizzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz girl this was yummy!


  • Still single
    July 3, 2008
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    Thanks for the entry and for letting us meander through your sexy fantacy.


  • Melissa Burns
    July 1, 2008
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    Thank you for entering.


  • NeverSayAddiction
    June 24, 2008
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    wondeful

    yes


  • Ms Sexy silver member
    May 28, 2008
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    The Bg is on point. He IS fine as hell. I loved the flow and the imaginary picture I got. *girn*


  • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
    April 9, 2008

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    lol this was a nice write maybe i should have came to n y and made some of your money when i was a dancer
    i must admit this was a great fantasy you build here from beginning to end you did a awesome job hon

    Juju


    • Levesta
      April 9, 2008
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      thanks Juju i really appreciate your time and comment


  • moluv10
    April 9, 2008
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    This is a hot write! I see you had plenty of inspiration for it too. Keep on writing...


    • Levesta
      April 9, 2008
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      YES I TRULY DID THANKS 4 STOPPING BY LOVE HOPE U COME BY AGAIN REAL SOON


  • Ephiphany
    April 7, 2008

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    Lawd....

    Sis, he is SEXY! Damn this was indeed a wonderful treat to see on a Monday Morning...actually on ANY morning Loved the flow here, and definately LOVE ur Background

    Great job on BOTH

    e

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