Soft and fluffy
You always support me
and have my back.
You are
strong
and sturdy
and know me well
for your bottom curves in
just the way I like it.
You are comforting to the touch,
And always there after a long hard day.
There is nothing more that I would ever want,
Than to have my butt pushed against your warm cushion.
Thank you for being there for me!
Author notes
hahahaha I love writing when I am hyper!
I hope you all like it!
Ode to My Chair - but not any chair (my favoritest chair in the whole wide world! )
Option 6 (Dedicate your poem to an inanimate object or a person with whom you've never spoken)
A contest entry
- 10 Prompts, 20 Poets, 1000 points by Embossed.
910 points, ended April 9, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Jeff's first year by cricketjeff.
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• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I did enjoy this, yes but the contest required two poems a pre-write and a fresh write, you have just the one poem so I have to stick at having enjoyed it.
Thank-you for this one though
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Do I really need to comment on this? I did already in school! I thought it was cute and sweet. and oh so comfortable
I'm noticing a certain trend. I know that they're mostly contest prompts, but I'm beginning to notice this happiness and lightheartedness in your poetry. Told you you don't need a class to teach you. It has to come naturally! Keep up the great work!
hehe. It's Alex!
Carli
PS: That's nothing to laugh about! Stupid Carli! -
I like how, not knowing about the prompt, a reader could get through most of the poem thinking you're talking about a person. Well done.
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Ha -- loved this. I have a chair, favorite, that was my grandmother's. My father remembers it from his boyhood. It is probably 70yrs at least. I have dragged it around with me since I was 18!
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You were indeed hyper! But I loved it. And I know what you mean, I recently and foolhardily bought a new chair and now I have to suffer the wrath of a less comfortable one.
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