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"Holla Back"

 

'Ya-all come-on in and sit a spell

I can promise you won't go to hell

Drop all that money into the sack

and I'll see what I can do about

                                                   ...asking him to cut you some slack

 

Confess your sins, wash'em away

get on track of a brand new day!

Give us love OG's And Yuppies

as for those ladies of the night

                                                   ...don't forget to show your puppies

 

Rappers, Ruff Necks, Pimps and Hoes

lay down your gold, forget all your woes

"YES FRIENDS" God shall touch us all

take care of him while your here

                                                 ...so you can make that last ~Call

 

Don't miss your chance to HOLLA back

with your very own ~Plan of attack

Remember us here, "We ain't hatin"

That's right you can climb aboard

                                                ...Were like you, just Ready and waitin!

 

                                           The REV: Will b. Quick

 

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  • Lady Altheia
    April 25, 2008

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    Hoodwinked

    Cute, I enjoyed reading this and I had to look at the picture but I thought it was amusing. Thank you for sharing your poem.


  • leslielovesthomas
    April 11, 2008

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    haha!!!

    great take on the prompt! i really enjoyed it...thank you so much for entering and good luck!


    keep writing

    leslie


  • BuriedTreasures silver member
    April 8, 2008
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    Very Funny and hope for the hopeless!!
    Favorite Stanza--
    "Don't miss your chance to HOLLA back
    with your very own ~Plan of attack
    And remember us here, "We ain't hatin"
    That's right you can climb aboard
    Were like you, just Ready and waitin!


    The REV: Will b. Quick <---Love This

    Best of luck in the contest!!


  • RadioPJ
    April 7, 2008

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    Ha, sounds like a church for me. The southern baptists are way too suspicious for my type. I think I will worship trees and stars for a while! They accept all, wtih no fees!


  • Keystone Theater
    April 7, 2008

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    Well it may have some satiric edge intended still there's something good about such a church. They are (probably for a fee) willing to accept everyone. Ok, true that's a rather dubious inclusion but well, if you haven't got anything else to turn to...

    The poem reads well, it has that slight southern feel to it.

    Hey, maybe they actually think they can save them all.

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