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Dawn Of The Dark

Encased in steel
Armour from hell
Emotions

Dead

Rot;

With bloodied hands
Life's carcass
Deliverance

Inadvertently

Brought;


Hurling absolution in your path
it disappeared;

perhaps;

where light meets dark...?

Author notes

prompt: picture by raiden2d88@photobucket.com

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  • LadyUnique silver member
    May 2, 2008
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    good ending
    thank you for entering and good luck


  • darkalesyse
    April 7, 2008
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    You should enter a poem of this style into my contest. :]