Protecting nothing within
the stone hearted mighty menace
terrorizes imagination,
penetrates mind and
threatens future.
Warring with surrealism -
imagination shrinks out of pain,
delivers deep feeling of abhorrence of sins.
Author notes
Prompt : Picture from raiden2d88@photobucket.com
A contest entry
- PIF 15 poets 20-30 words by poppa.
1050 points, ended April 8, 2008, 13 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Wanna know what you think
Comments
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cool write. thanks for entering and good luck.
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warring with surrealism. Thats a good line!
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So true, you are becoming more and more sharp due to flying feelings inside, keep it up my dear shree
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Great take on the prompt and congratulations on the award. Peace in light and love.
Noah
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I stopped in on this contest, as a friend is the one holding it...the pic, I got nothing...
BUT boy I am glad you did
I really like this Kiddy...the title really stood out and the words matched and gave the pic such life...
Great work and I hope you do well in the contest with it
Cindy
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Hi Cindy...
Thanks for stopping by this lil poem...
I was like 'who this cinfullydelicious is?"...
So u changed ur screen name... nice one..
Love
-Kiddy
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hehehe
yes I have had a name change and found you on AP, YaY :0
Stay well
Cindy
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