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Retribution

No forgiveness

 

            or mercy.

 

        Judged, condemned,

 

              eternal retribution.

 

Drowning in my own depravity.

 

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  • Tattboyspet
    April 7, 2008
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    enjoyed this take on the prompt ... thank you for your entry


    • Corvus Corone
      April 7, 2008
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      Thank you for the pic prompt, been a while since I had the chance to write one of your pics.


  • LadyDementia gold member
    April 7, 2008
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    A fab piece, awesome take on the picture, good luck


  • The Poetic Angel
    April 7, 2008

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    wonderful write on the pix Jems m'Lady

    he looks kinda in pain in that floor lol

    Good luck in the contest

    xxx Your angel xxx

    i love You


    • Corvus Corone
      April 7, 2008
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      Thank you My angel, and kudos for reading.

      Love you, Mine

      YLD

      Jem xxxx

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