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Many Roads Await

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Many links extended, t[r]end outwards into light,
As rainbow drops descended dispense due dew delight.
New roads must be defended to stimulate, rewrite
Years starting, for years ended show slight reflection bright.
Right, wrong, misapprehended, are neither black nor white,
Out and inside when [bl]ended, intolerance indict.
As wheels turn, Time,suspended, prepares for further flight,
Dream theme streams are intended to startle, day and night.
Spread is each page portended as message to incite
All walls to fall, bridge mended, ways narrow dynamite
With fervour unpretended so men worldwide unite.
All roads to Rome, befriended, help ease poor people's plight
Imply toil, tears expended gain better world in sight.
Tomorrow's tracks extended just future must invite.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • watergoddess101
    September 13

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    Wonderful Writen!

    I love the whole poem all of it. This reflects exatly how I feel on life. the meaning I got from this is that there will always be road to choose from some will be wrong and others righ. I hope that was the meanig you meant to get across!

  • crazymomma
    July 4

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    Very nice use of assonance "Dream theme streams"
    I really enjoyed how this made me ponder the future and the imagery you created.

    . Rewarded 4

  • Well done!!! the flow was really smooth and the rhyme was almost flawless!!! I really enjoyed reading this!!! Congratulations on winning the bronze!!! And thank you for sharing this with us!!!


    Maeve
  • Well, I asked for awsome poems, and you sertantly delivered. Thank you for entering!
  • Awesome! This was very very well done, and most definitely deserving of a win in the contest.. it flowed very well and the rhyming fit perfectly..

    . Rewarded 4

  • Beautiful write... The depth of your writing is that which allows us (as readers) to escape momentarily from the weight of life and transcend in to a world governed by the pen. Beautiful alliteration, phenominal word choice...most impressive!

    . Rewarded 4

  • Bravo!

    This was wonderful to read!
    Please tell me more about your bakgrounds!
    I love the way you set this all up and
    the skill with which you write!

    'As wheels turn, Time,suspended, prepares for further flight,
    Dream theme streams are intended to startle, day and night.' and all senses are awakened, dear poet! Jane

    . Rewarded 6

  • Outstanding

    The rhyme scheme is impressive and this must have been nearly impossible to do. A strong poem with great flow and detail. Fantastic to read. A true gem.

    . Rewarded 4

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