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Price Of Deliverance

Armor's symbolic to not only,
he who comes to rescue,
savior, guardian and warrior;

it also indicates deliverance,
doesn't come freely,
he wears armor, knowing
there may be battle.

Peace!
 
 ~ 

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20-30 Words

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  • Three Doves
    April 8, 2008

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    Yes indeed there will be battle. A great take on the prompt and congratulations on the award.
    Peace in light and love
    Noah


  • dustookie2
    April 7, 2008

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    A warrior of the future with his aero dynamic come darth vader head gear....yet he is a warrior as you say thre will be battles he will engage the cost of peace on this warring planet perhaps wrongly named .... Mars the God of War would be more at home here than Venus the Love God...Brilliant take on the prompt...there is a depth t your words that strikes me ... always in peace and harmony but with an arsonal of weapons... Good luck HH in this contest.


  • Kiddy
    April 7, 2008

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    Very good take on the prompt... Good creativity...
    All the best in the contest
    Love
    -kiddy


  • Age of Rain
    April 7, 2008
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    Nicely said with a great trailing ending. Marvelous write!