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When Words Failed Me.

I knew what I wanted to say,
But all the words got in the way.
Leaving me stranded
In an all-too-familiar place.

Just when I had it all planned
Everything hit the fan.
Then the confusion came
And now it’ll never be the same.

I love you.
The thought stuck in my mind,
Time after time because
Words failed me again.

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Didn't use picture.

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  • EntombedCrystalRose
    April 22, 2008
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    A nice little poem, but made me want more! Perhaps if you expanded it a bit?
    Thank you for entering.