Scythe of lust slashes emotion free;
forbidden promises fulfilled with empty words -
lifetime to ponder ...
Author notes
Lust closes off all emotional involvement and once the bite has been taken there is no going back - we live a lifetime wondering whether it was the right thing to do ... ~smile~
A contest entry
- PIF Semi quickie 10/15 by Valley Girl.
300 points, ended April 7, 2008, 7 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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COngrats on the trophy.
I like how you ended this one off.
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This is wonderful,
and congradulations
on the silver.
Riftkin
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This was very much deserving of a trophey. Your words are so very true my dear. It's a shame more people don't look before they leap (bite).
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Great take on the prompt. I like the words you have chosen to use. Nice imagery, best of luck in the contest, and thank you for entering.
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I really like what you've said here! A little bit of lust is good.. but is it lasting if that is all that's involved...
Great write for this prompt!
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Jeez! This says so MUCH in so few words!
Can't pick on one particular phrase, it is all brilliant!
Well done!
YLM
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