It's not over; are you insane?
We are a puzzle, in a fitted frame.
How can the word 'over' ever break the scene?
What did all that love, hugs, and kisses mean?
Are you a dunce, we can't be through.
You're inside me now, and part of me's in you.
The contract we signed was irrevocable,
just fan those fires, they are still stokable.
Some people just don't get the 'gist' of a thing.
They take for granted and they take off their 'ring.'
I'd have you know, this is one hell of a ride,
and it ain't stopping, it's a moving tide.
You might as well relax and enjoy the flow,
'cause once strapped in, there's no where else to go!
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i simply love your conviction...never say never, when you're married, cos its for life and in death...never let go... thats one lesson we all need to learn. part of one another untill the end is at an end.
BEAUTIFUL.
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Thank you.
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a good piece of poetry you have penned - hehehe yeah it is not over till it is over, there is no use trying to escape the arms of love
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oui-oui....
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