Diamond back conspires
alluring slithers collide.
Amorous cobra with a
provocative lust burning.
Firtatious hot blood showing
lustful desires exciting.
Passionate love blazing
steaming mist growing .
Explicit sensations orgasmic
erotic exploding.
Author notes
Snake bite
A contest entry
- Semi Quick Contest by Reptile Lady ADULT ONLY PLEASE by Reptile Lady.
550 points, ended April 8, 2008, 10 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Fantastic
Steamy and hot, the power of thought and the power of words...
Thank you for your entry and good luck in my contest
Julie -
The first four lines were expemplery delicious. Then (just my opinon) you when back to using chiched words, seen in so many erotic poems. INternal rhyme was excellent. Nice take on the prompt. Best wishes in this contest.
Shana -
WOW---Great Piece---Great take on the pic and excellent imagery throughout! Best of luck to you in the contest!
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