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Passing Of The Torch

Stoic scenery
passing seasons post
untimely exit

Tres' bien
nature's motions of the hour
pulled from display

Future tense questions
will the next round fair better?
sequence soon to come

A contest entry

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  • Manoj Sanyal
    April 10, 2008
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    well explained.....
    Best wishes and good luck


  • jasminerose
    April 7, 2008

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    You have beautifully captured the sense of season's beckoning call. Lovely penning in the haiku chain.
    I wish you all the best in the contest!
    Jasminerose


  • individuality gold member
    April 7, 2008

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    a good piece of poetry - i like the olympic reference here, i wish the torch would hurry up and be passed to warmer days

  • goalsv
    April 7, 2008
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    Very good, keeping with the theme.


    • 2lullabyhaven
      April 7, 2008
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      hahahaa, tried my hand...Haikus get my curiosity...smile...one day hopefully to capture its essence.

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