Stoic scenery
passing seasons post
untimely exit
Tres' bien
nature's motions of the hour
pulled from display
Future tense questions
will the next round fair better?
sequence soon to come
A contest entry
- HAIKU STRING CONTEST... 15 POETS... QUICKIE by Manoj Sanyal.
370 points, ended April 10, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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well explained.....
Best wishes and good luck
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You have beautifully captured the sense of season's beckoning call. Lovely penning in the haiku chain.
I wish you all the best in the contest!
Jasminerose

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Thanks so much for this elegant review
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a good piece of poetry - i like the olympic reference here, i wish the torch would hurry up and be passed to warmer days


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smiling here - I wish that you'd get your wish
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Very good, keeping with the theme.
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hahahaa, tried my hand...Haikus get my curiosity...smile...one day hopefully to capture its essence.
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