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Seaside Haiku String

at the water's edge
the sun's reflection ripples
like bright sea serpents

we find a pink shell
half buried in fine sand
and warm to the touch

lying on the sand
eyes closed, not touching, content
we  enjoy the sun

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  • Manoj Sanyal
    April 10, 2008
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    nice string.
    Best wishes and good luck


  • jasminerose
    April 7, 2008

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    MMMM sounds like a place I would surely love to be right now! Warm, sandy, the sun shining!!
    Beautiful imagery and a very enjoyable haiku chain!!
    All the best to you!
    Jasminerose