Lustful temptations,
A vipers seductive glance.
Don't let the doe eyes fool you.
She's venom in an angels skin.
She'll pull you with just a look,
true basilisk in training.
Author notes
snake bite
A contest entry
- Semi Quick Contest by Reptile Lady ADULT ONLY PLEASE by Reptile Lady.
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Comments
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beautiful, it matches the picture perfectly!
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Wow
You have painted your words so well
Love the whole piece
Thank you for your entry and good luck in my contest
Julie
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This was fantastic. Loved the seduction by just a glance, and--I learned a new word, but still must look it up! LOL I think you aced this prompt! Best wishes in tis contest!
Shana -
This absolutely ROCKED!!!!! You totally knocked this one out of the park!!! Very similar to something that I would have written!!! Your last line was the icing on the cake for me here....Wonderful wonderful job and I wish you all the luck here!!!
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