Water wet and water inspired
takes the place of fire desire
multiplicities of demands
water waits and water jams.
The defiance of the desert equates
to the stack of water weights
distilled, flowing, falling rivers
turns the dead into re-livers.
Aqua fragrance - feast for the few
misty heaven, and rocking mountain dew
intensification's stimulation
best-kept secret's double revelation.
A contest entry
- Rain or Rainbows by islekine.
400 points, ended April 8, 2008, 14 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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a good piece of poetry you have penned - a lovely raindrop shining poem, i fell like dancing in the rain but for once it is not raining here
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Good morning..'puter going mad here. typing slowly
one letter at a time...
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