Tip toe through garden
sweet scent overwhelms posture
allergies blooming
Sneeze attack springs forth
tissues in hand standing by
fancy footwork starts
Beautiful ballet
crushing all blossoms planted
I weep, for winter
Author notes
Haiku Chain Quickie
Dedicated to my Son
In a list
A contest entry
- HAIKU STRING CONTEST... 15 POETS... QUICKIE by Manoj Sanyal.
370 points, ended April 10, 2008, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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You did a great job with this. Congrats on the well deserved HM.
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Thank you so very much for the lovely comment and the congratulations
Linda
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haha!!!... well expressed.
Best wishes and good luck,
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Thank you so very much for the wonderful award on my entry!! I am so pleased that you found my poem enjoyable!!
Jasminerose
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I loved this entry!!!
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we soon forget times of sneeze attack, then on arrival, we wish for another season. it bothers me as well, though I find spring to be the growth of love, plesant, joyful time.
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Oh my, a humorous poem that is deftly written! That is the rarest of art here on AP and immediately makes me a fan!
Just a delight to read this poem which shows such skill.
I hope the judge sees the skill in these lines, I know some devalue humor for some odd reason. And of course to do it through haiku, and chained at that---I bow in deep reverence.
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Allergies... yuk
They can sure wreck havoc on our otherwise dignified stance. You expressed it all in this piece
Good luck in the contest
Dee
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Can't do Haiku but this is brilliant-
xxx Hilly
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Very beautiful and something
that I can relate to. Allergies
are such a pain in the neck.
Great work as always my friend
and good luck to you with this
piece in the contest!
Jeremy0826
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