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Music

The beauty of you soul
has penetrated mine
through countless melodies
speaking thoughts that
once were my own

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  • Chainsaw
    April 16, 2008

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    You put that very well. It's something that almost any audience can relate to - you resisted the temptation to focus on your personal musical tastes, or even the music we get in western culture. Well done.