In health, restore
in knowledge, taste
for beauty's feats
are fast to waste.
Chew slowly.
A contest entry
- PIF Semi quickie 10/15 by Valley Girl.
300 points, ended April 7, 2008, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Great take on the prompt. I like the rythm in this write. Best of luck in the contest, and thank you for entering.
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Ah, excellent. Yes we gobble down our experiences far too fast to enjoy them. A nice take on the Latin phrase and a definite point to ponder.


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This was really good. I really like the image you created.. Short but very interesting..
Best wishes for you in the contest..
Peace to you,
Jetleena



