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Haiku

All the world a stage
you and I are two actors
seasons play in back
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Spring is the cute queen
Autumn dictates more of terms
Winters embrace all
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fall colours-- on ground
look like departed lovers
waiting for new spring
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HAIKU STRING CONTEST... 15 POETS... QUICKIE

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  • Manoj Sanyal
    April 9, 2008
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    nicely penned string combining life and seasons.
    Best wishes and good luck,


  • jasminerose
    April 7, 2008

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    A lovely way of combining the seasons with love, beautifully penned haiku chain!
    I wish you all the best in the contest
    Jasminerose


  • catz Moderators member
    April 7, 2008

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    An interesting set of haiku The seasons fit very nicely into your verses
    Good luck in the contest

    Dee