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gin and tonic

Random ramblings spew out of the man sitting alone in the darkest corner of this bar. I wonder what he is really saying in between the words.Slow mutterings lulling me into the darkness with him. Can anyone else hear the beats flowing in shallow breaths. I sit here swirling my thoughts into the bottom of a gin and tonic. I am curious to see beyond the borders that confine. This place is crowded for a Tuesday.

I much prefer the solitude of Monday nights.

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  • Keystone Theater
    April 7, 2008

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    It is a lonely portrait, one where a person sits, preferring to unravel another's spewing rhetoric to whatever he/she avoids. You have done an exceptional job of explaining that desolation. It is really well done.


    • emanon
      April 7, 2008
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      Thank you.

      I am not quite sure I am done with this. It was just a freewrite. But thank you for taking the time to read and comment.