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In Chris's Arms

Embraced by gentle love
My heart has been completed
Through his arms

My fragile soul
Encased in a box of love
Held in his arms

I give my heart to him
For him to have and to hold
In his arms

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  • going nowhere
    April 7, 2008
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    giving a heart is a fragile thing... and to trust someone to hold it is beautiful...


  • notorious gold member
    April 6, 2008

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    First of all, thanks for stating which prompt you used--somebody read the rules.

    The most striking line: "My fragile soul/Encased in a box of love"

    ThanxX for entering, and good luck.