two take flight
over treetops high
resting place
leaves rustle
branches offer shelter
cozy
nesting happily
lovebirds bill and coo
home
dee garner
© april 6, 2008
In a list
A contest entry
- HAIKU STRING CONTEST... 15 POETS... QUICKIE by Manoj Sanyal.
370 points, ended April 10, 2008, 9 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Fun stuff, Catz. Congrats on the Gold!
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Very good write
This is great and congradulation on the gold
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Oh Congratulations on the Gold,, I knew this was a winner the moment I read!!
You are quite the talented poetess Dee
What a wonderful honor to read your poems!!
Linda
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i much prefer the haiku form when they are like this, a couple or so together rather than just a single one there is flight here and smiles
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While the travels are always fun, there's no place
like home...
Tis raining today, so maybe a good sign as the snow
may finally be over...A few more weeks and it may be
time to dust off the cameras and do some nature
stalking...
Four to One
Four wings flap
as two land on branch
becoming one
Have a lovely weekend...
Hugs...Eddy
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We both included birds in our haiku - think they are an important part of nature. Nice string you have penned here.
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nice haiku string expressing love in nature.
Best wishes and good luck,
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A very pretty picture you have penned with such delightful words! Very lovely with beautiful sentiment!
I wish you all the best in the contest!
Jasminerose
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First is my favorite, I see the birdies sitting at the tip top of the tree. And of course the second is an extension of the first and the third of the second, wow am I slow, I just saw the connection now, lol.
Well I'm slow but I do get there eventually.
Good luck in the contest, if you want I can try to bribe the judge.
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Claps in climatic applause...lovely set of Haikus-tres' bien
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