You're my best friend ever
We share a bond of blood, boys, and so much more...
You know me better than anyone, and vise versa
You also know that I don't have the strength to live like this
You know I can't do it
You know you can live without me
You know it will be hard, but I know you can do it
I know you can make it without me
With the people who surround you, I have courage in you and i give you whatever strength i have left in me
You tell me everything and you only lie to protect me
We've had our share of those stupid teenage fights
We've had our share of boring conversations
and
We've had our share of tears
We've been through so much together
I wish I could do this without having tears run down my face, but I can't
I wish this was all so simple and not complicated
But it's not as easy as just pack up and boom all the problems went away
It can't be solved like that, believe me, I wish it could be
But it isn't
So, here we go, this new journey
It'll be a roller coaster ride for both of us, but I know you'll come out alive
You know I'd die for you any day, and I know you'd do the same for me.
I know we had a pact that if one of us goes, so does the other...
I'm sorry I couldn't let you follow that rule if I'm the one to go
I can't let you give up all your dreams just because I am not there to see them happen
You have so much going for you and I can't let you give any of it up
So here i go, off to bed
Cross your heart, I hope to die...
I love you more than the world, and I hope that when I'm gone, you can find someone like me to fill the shoes I left open, and hopefully you won't feel the pain I have felt for so long
So let's let this roller coaster fired up, and we'll go up the hill...
But know, when you come down, I won't be sitting next to you anymore...
A contest entry
- Break My Heart by Mistress Masquerade.
600 points, ended July 11, 2008, 47 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Raw Emotion by x meerz.
500 points, ended July 28, 2008, 79 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Break my heart and make me cry by God is my reality.
900 points, ended August 11, 2008, 79 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Suicide Solution by Blood Magick.
540 points, ended July 26, 2008, 79 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Anything you want by MrCrepsley.
600 points, ended September 10, 2008, 195 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
what do you guys think?
Comments
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oh my gosh, this is so sad, but sweet but sad. I don't think it's right for my contest. But I can totally see the emotion in you. I love it. It's great. It would be great for a different contest, but I don't think this is the right scenario, But this is seriously sad, and really good
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scary.
really.
the last two lines are my absoutle favorite <3
thanks for entering and good luck -
You know this one seriously did break my heart and had me bawling like a baby, it perfectly fits this contest and it makes you so damn lucky that I know this is about us.. Stupid special edge! Haha, you know I love this one, good luck.
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This is like scary. But good scary, in a weird way... It kept me reading till the end, waiting for what would be said next. Good Job.




