Silent retreat
into confessions
of lies...
cliched love
holding
strickened solitude
~submerged~
in last attempt
of our kiss
~I believe~
A contest entry
- Quicke 15poets/20 words/20 min by Blooming Poet.
360 points, ended April 6, 2008, 12 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Title has a typo, but the poem itself is quite good. Love is a hard thing, even in the best circumstances and until it can be maintained in a vacuum I guess it shall remain that way. Congrats on the gold trophy.
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I got that
thanks!
pri
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wow, such a great work here. such an amazing use of words. I am in awe
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Thanks for the comment and the gold
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