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[ The sun is blotted out for a few moments, ]

The sun is blotted out for a few moments,

A flayed shadow cast upon the ground

A Pegasus flies through the mountain pass

He swoops and soars, then dips and circles around

Whinnying to the sky, snorting, tumbling

His hooves shine golden in the light

Mane flowing long down bowed neck

Just like the snow, so imperial white

Then he's gone, flown far beyond

The mountains, claim their domain once more

The sky is no longer so seemingly wide,

Void, empty, lost of the lore

How can it ever be the same

After such a show?

Hmmmmm. . .Meh. . .What Ever. . .It's Sucky. . .& I Hate It x x x x

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  • Emo-Goth666
    April 17

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    y jhu h8 it? i think iz good m fav bit waz 'The mountains, claim their domain once more

    The sky is no longer so seemingly wide,

    Void, empty, lost of the lore'

    great work =)