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The Rain in her Heart is Salvation




her heart fell
one drop at a time,
not content
at being held to a standard

gray skies are ominous
if that's your perception,
for her it's the conundrum
of that same old song...

she lies,
cries,
tries,
and then gives in
because it's the convenient
thing to do

she hurts,
huddles,
shivering,
trying to avoid puddles,
and in the end
she survives

riding out the rainbows of despair
she finds her place and embraces it


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  • islekine gold member
    April 8, 2008

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    I love the first stanza....

    The rest of the poem too...but I really like: "not content at being held to a standard" Thanks for entering!
    Write on!
    *PEACE*