Beyond five senses one beauty dawns
like a full moon expanded to zenith
with mystique multiplied
As form traverses possibility
reflected naked in hungry eyes
to mingle surrender with astonishment
Author notes
'Other men said they have seen angels,
But I have seen thee
And thou art enough.'
~ by G. Moore ~
A contest entry
- . by Aurora Ceres.
600 points, ended April 7, 2008, 5 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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This is so beautiful! Your sixth sense being the beauty beheld...
Well deserved trophy!
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This was so dreamy and mystical. I loved your diction and the overall feeling of the entire thing. Definitely worth the silver trophy!
Wonderful write
Jeanette*~
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aww this is very sweet
wonderful write and good luck in the contest
take care
stephanie
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lol - wonder who you were thinking of while writing this huh?
last line was the spinner for me ... after reading it I had to re-read the entire thing and it tasted even better then
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very nice interpretation, yes.
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How do you get comments before you even write? Magic!
Beautiful imagery. I could easily picture a huge moon filling the entire sky, and it was a wonderful background to the rest of the poem. Good luck in the contest. -
Excellent
What a terrific poem for the prompt. So creative and well expressed. Best of luck in the contest.
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You know what darling, I can not pick out one line that I love...I love it all. This is just perfect. i wish you all the best in the contest..although I do say i love the second set, it hits to the core.
LUBS ya bro!
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**peaks in and smiles...** I will leave my branding off clappies for I know you will deserve them please let me know when this is finished and I shall come and leave proper comment..Just wanted to wish you luck.
Passions
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It's done sis.
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