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one tear at a time

if only i could tell you
how i really feel
if only i could show you
what it feels like to be real

but since those three little words mean so much
i have to kept inside
my unending love

bu whats the point
of being together
when all you really do

is cause pain to one each other
because those three little words
are keeping us from being real

why can't we just them them
why is it so hard to do
we both know we feel this way
why can't it just be true

why are we falling apart like this
it's slipping right threw me
why can't i just grasp it
like when we hold hands

why does it have to be like this
i just don't understand

how can three little words
tear us apart

i can see that you love me
the way you look into my eyes

the tinkle in yours
and the sparkle in mine

maybe were just not ready
for something this big

but what can i do
until that time

i guess i just have to see
one tear at a time

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  • penman gold member
    May 22, 2008
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    Excellent

    Wonderful collection of lines, so full of emotions. Thank you for sharing.


  • TheShadowsOfMe
    April 15, 2008

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    Woah... Awesome I would reccomend going back and checking on some spelling mistakes and maybe replacing a few words but all in all great write You really have a talent for poetry