DARKness is the sanctuary of shadows
the heart is tortured from a lost love
allowing the soul to swim in emptiness
the body is laid to rest from anxiety
shadows now become peaceful in DARKness
Author notes
~~~~~just decided to write something for a change since itz been awhile~~~~~
A contest entry
- PREWRITE MADNESS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! by Kathraina.
650 points, ended August 15, 460 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Nicely done with this piece.
Good flow and imagery here!
Bravo
♥ Kate -
weird, but what else should I expect from you lol... it's DARK, and I like it. Come stalk me a little more, will ya?
Love ya.
WW
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thnx, i know i'm a poor stalker, luvya, DARK.
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I like this piece, it says a lot in just a little space. It makes me think through each word.
I was just making my rounds and thought I'd drop a note. Hope you're doing well.
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thanx for the comment, DARK.
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Wow!!
There he is
Happy to see that quill dancing my Friend!!
Hope You are doing Fantastic and all is well~
You certainly have a way to paint pictures that stimulate the Mind...
Woooooooo Hooooooooooo
Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
Best wishes too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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thanx for the comment, wanted to fill in the stars but there were none to fill in, DARK.
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Imagery is amazing, every word paints a picture that not everyone can handle. Great write.
♥
whisper
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thanx for the comment, wanted to fill in the stars but there were none to fill in, DARK.
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Wow! For you to have only a few lines there speak volumes. You did a great job on this! Keep it up and continue penning!
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thanx for the comment, wanted to fill in the stars but there were none to fill in, DARK.
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I am totally in love with this!
Speechless on how much I love this
♥
Stay safe
Love you
~Manda
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thanx for your precious words. i write off the wall at the strangest times and i was in the mood for writing, luvya, DARK.
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