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sanctuary of DARKness

DARKness is the sanctuary of shadows
the heart is tortured from a lost love
allowing the soul to swim in emptiness
the body is laid to rest from anxiety
shadows now become peaceful in DARKness

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~~~~~just decided to write something for a change since itz been awhile~~~~~

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  • Kathraina silver member
    August 10
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    Nicely done with this piece.
    Good flow and imagery here!
    Bravo


    ♥ Kate


  • WingedWolf
    May 19, 2008

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    weird, but what else should I expect from you lol... it's DARK, and I like it. Come stalk me a little more, will ya?

    Love ya.

    WW


  • Pixielated
    April 17, 2008

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    I like this piece, it says a lot in just a little space. It makes me think through each word.
    I was just making my rounds and thought I'd drop a note. Hope you're doing well.


  • Desire gold member
    April 8, 2008
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    Wow!!

    There he is
    Happy to see that quill dancing my Friend!!
    Hope You are doing Fantastic and all is well~
    You certainly have a way to paint pictures that stimulate the Mind...
    Woooooooo Hooooooooooo
    Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
    Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
    Best wishes too
    and much love~ Desire~*~


    • theDARK1 gold member
      April 24, 2008
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      thanx for the comment, wanted to fill in the stars but there were none to fill in, DARK.


  • whispernthedark Greeters member
    April 7, 2008

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    Imagery is amazing, every word paints a picture that not everyone can handle. Great write.


    whisper


    • theDARK1 gold member
      April 24, 2008
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      thanx for the comment, wanted to fill in the stars but there were none to fill in, DARK.


  • DarkChildsKiss silver member
    April 6, 2008

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    Wow! For you to have only a few lines there speak volumes. You did a great job on this! Keep it up and continue penning!


    • theDARK1 gold member
      April 24, 2008
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      thanx for the comment, wanted to fill in the stars but there were none to fill in, DARK.


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    April 6, 2008

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    I am totally in love with this!
    Speechless on how much I love this


    Stay safe
    Love you
    ~Manda

    • theDARK1 gold member
      April 6, 2008
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      thanx for your precious words. i write off the wall at the strangest times and i was in the mood for writing, luvya, DARK.

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